The darkness comes into my life and takes me. Every fibre of my being is chilled and I can feel nothing but emptiness.
Loved ones appear distant and unapproachable. All wish to help, but instead aids the darkness in its powers.
The darkness easily consumes me. I can no longer see light anymore. My mind has darkened to thoughts of anger and despair. My heart blackened like tar.
The darkness takes me and I know that this time I will not return. Every breath I take feels like torture. The darkness takes me and I can fight no more.
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Hey Murees,
ReplyDeleteI recognise the feeling, nicely evoked.
regards
mood
Moody Writing
There is not one creative soul that has not felt that way at least once. Nicely written and totally felt.
ReplyDeleteLooking out my window at the rainy morning, the fog rolling across the field, and that damn blinking cursor reminding me I have not met my word goal today...
ReplyDeleteYes, I feel this sentiment exactly!
Nice piece. :)
I like your D post, it's nicely worded.
ReplyDeleteHappy D Day!
I know the feeling!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful post!
Mooderino - Thank you.
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Brianna - Thank you so much.
Deliciously dark - loved it!
ReplyDeleteEllie Garratt
Good take on darkness. I wonder how you felt after the darkness had its way.
ReplyDeleteEllie - Thank you. Also, thank you for stopping by and following my blog.
ReplyDeleteAngela - In truth? I see a bit of the light.
beautiful writing.
ReplyDeleteThis was beautifully written - well done!
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done!
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Very nicely done.
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